Peer Review (LO 4)

I have made progress with learning outcome four because I have been “able to critique their own and others’ work by emphasizing global revision early in the writing process and local revision later in the process.” For example, I gave Avery feedback and revision suggestions on her second essay. I went through the essay sentence by sentence deciding what learning outcomes they would be, and if they were feedback or revisions. The yellow highlights focuses on the integrating ideas learning outcome and global revisions, while the red focuses on the transitions between paragraphs and local revisions.